tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-981957145092638479.post2597928225482985431..comments2023-09-15T06:41:26.215-05:00Comments on Emptynester: Saturday Centus - Danny Part 1Kathttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12396548112800738809noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-981957145092638479.post-44879001899092809452010-11-14T19:26:04.135-06:002010-11-14T19:26:04.135-06:00Kat, vivid and moving. I can see and hear Danny ...Kat, vivid and moving. I can see and hear Danny in my minds eye.<br /><br />I'm really, really glad, though, I didn't give you guys 25 words this week. mwahahahahahahaha.<br /><br />OK, off to read Part two.Jennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462124067637610359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-981957145092638479.post-17834398961577712032010-11-12T15:17:17.089-06:002010-11-12T15:17:17.089-06:00You describe her memories as being so vivid...even...You describe her memories as being so vivid...even after 11 years. As a writer you make the reader feel that they are part of the story.Amyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01224808618141191730noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-981957145092638479.post-37608090886525621332010-11-11T05:58:16.672-06:002010-11-11T05:58:16.672-06:00This is beautiful, and touching my heart. I can he...This is beautiful, and touching my heart. I can hear Danny laughs and dances still..~✽Mumsy✽~https://www.blogger.com/profile/10644719969613080399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-981957145092638479.post-37485598473540595152010-11-10T16:20:36.189-06:002010-11-10T16:20:36.189-06:00Aw, I hope this isn't true. Danny sounds like ...Aw, I hope this isn't true. Danny sounds like a sweet guy! Great use of the prompt!~AmesAmeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15074479473400202674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-981957145092638479.post-22697134460028576822010-11-10T04:46:24.860-06:002010-11-10T04:46:24.860-06:00Dear Kat,
Thank you for your kind words about my S...Dear Kat,<br />Thank you for your kind words about my SC-post. 'Jerk' is the right word! Glad the message was clearly understood!<br /><br />Love your characterization of Danny in your SC-text. Excellent use of the prompt. The natural expectation is that 'Anniversay' means 'Wedding Anniversary', but it can mean the anniversary of any event, even a tragedy.<br /><br />Best wishes,<br />Anna<br /><br />For the benefit of other readers:<br /><a href="http://annasadornments.blogspot.com/2010/11/mrs-jenny-matlocks-saturday-centus-week.html" rel="nofollow">Anna's SC week 27</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17926688000745346961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-981957145092638479.post-44197770538429468552010-11-08T20:10:29.950-06:002010-11-08T20:10:29.950-06:00Oh Kat, I don't know how you say so much with ...Oh Kat, I don't know how you say so much with so few words, but you do it beautifully. laurieBargain Decorating with Lauriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13582640485560903639noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-981957145092638479.post-1725834802371783942010-11-07T20:48:11.611-06:002010-11-07T20:48:11.611-06:00Good take on the prompt. I just lost my best frie...Good take on the prompt. I just lost my best friend on Friday afternoon at 3:30.Judiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02778815502961000469noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-981957145092638479.post-16469252406856803032010-11-07T20:29:59.704-06:002010-11-07T20:29:59.704-06:00You do such a great job of bringing him to life in...You do such a great job of bringing him to life in this short sketch.<br /><br />TeresaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-981957145092638479.post-71590361923618049672010-11-07T17:57:45.515-06:002010-11-07T17:57:45.515-06:00Kat, every week I look forward to seeing what you ...Kat, every week I look forward to seeing what you write, and you never, ever disappoint me. This is beautiful. Can't wait to see Part II. I almost read it first, but then I found Part I! I'm going down the reader. LOL!<br /><br />XO,<br /><br />Sheila :-)The Quintessential Magpiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04010105595059019883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-981957145092638479.post-4326495244308272262010-11-07T13:45:29.714-06:002010-11-07T13:45:29.714-06:00Very moving use of the prompt.Very moving use of the prompt.Bookiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12043111213031211794noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-981957145092638479.post-49966555164714056552010-11-07T12:57:51.880-06:002010-11-07T12:57:51.880-06:00This was wonderful,Kat! Very eloquent word choices...This was wonderful,Kat! Very eloquent word choices and visceral imagery. Excellent job this week!<br /><br />P.S. Southern bashing, moi? Well I do de-clay-uh!Tgoettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06850303812765307075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-981957145092638479.post-14916612025680766012010-11-07T10:07:02.077-06:002010-11-07T10:07:02.077-06:00Oh, boy. I could almost feel his benevolent presen...Oh, boy. I could almost feel his benevolent presence.<br /><br />Good job, Kat.<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.com